我的梦想当黑客英语作文（关于梦想是程序员的英语作文）
文章大纲：
英语作文，我的理想（带翻译）。
When I got settled, the total use of the microwave to do their own things to eat. One day, my father saw me, I am afraid to say that I grew up as a cook. I immediately shaken like a rattle-drum head, you said : "That is not my ideal. When I grow up I want to IT (information technology) industries. "Yes, I bought a computer five years ago after his father, I am familiar with it day by day. Until last year, and I have formed a deep bond with it. From then on, I want success in the information technology industry to make contributions to the cause of national computer.But my father said I could only do in the field "testing the game," is what the new game, and always let me play with, the report there will be any games. I think what he said is not their fault, I always play games recently, those who do not have a veteran like Flash.In recent days, I sprouted out of a bad idea : I will be playing the game that the network server to the black. My account will revise the highest level. However, I Xiangliaoyouxiang, this is wrong, but was caught by the police network is not good. When hackers but also need high computer skills. As a member of the IT industry is my ideal, I would like to advance this goal, to improve their computer skills当我闲得没事时，就总自己用微波炉做点东西吃。一天，爸爸看见我这样，说我长大恐怕是要当厨师了。我立刻把头摇得像拨浪鼓似的，说：“那不是我的理想，我长大想做IT（信息技术）行业。” 没错，自从五年前爸爸给我买来电脑后，我就一天天地熟悉它。到了去年，我已经和它结下了不解之缘。从那时候开始，我就想要在信息技术行业取得成就，为国家计算机事业做出贡献。 可是爸爸说我在这个行业中只能做“游戏测试员”，就是什么游戏新出来，总是先让我玩玩，报告游戏中有什么错误。我觉得他说的没有错，我最近一段时间老是玩游戏，那些FLASH之类的老也不用了。 最近几天，我萌生出了一个不好的想法：将我玩的那个 *** 游戏的服务器给黑了，将我的账号修改成更高级别。可是，我想了又想，这样做是不对的，而且被 *** 警察抓到也是不好的。而且当黑客也需要很高的电脑技术的。成为IT行业的一员是我的理想，所以我要向这个目标前进，提高自己的电脑技术.
英语作文我的理想
My Dream
when I got settled, the total use of the microwave to do their own things to eat. One day, my father saw me, I am afraid to say that I grew up as a cook. I immediately shaken like a rattle-drum head, you said : "That is not my ideal. When I grow up I want to IT (information technology) industries. "
Yes, I bought a computer five years ago after his father, I am familiar with it day by day. Until last year, and I have formed a deep bond with it. From then on, I want success in the information technology industry to make contributions to the cause of national computer.
But my father said I could only do in the field "testing the game," is what the new game, and always let me play with, the report there will be any games. I think what he said is not their fault, I always play games recently, those who do not have a veteran like Flash.
In recent days, I sprouted out of a bad idea : I will be playing the game that the network server to the black. My account will revise the highest level. However, I Xiangliaoyouxiang, this is wrong, but was caught by the police network is not good. When hackers but also need high computer skills. As a member of the IT industry is my ideal, I would like to advance this goal, to improve their computer skills
当我闲得没事时，就总自己用微波炉做点东西吃。一天，爸爸看见我这样，说我长大恐怕是要当厨师了。我立刻把头摇得像拨浪鼓似的，说：“那不是我的理想，我长大想做IT（信息技术）行业。”
没错，自从五年前爸爸给我买来电脑后，我就一天天地熟悉它。到了去年，我已经和它结下了不解之缘。从那时候开始，我就想要在信息技术行业取得成就，为国家计算机事业做出贡献。
可是爸爸说我在这个行业中只能做“游戏测试员”，就是什么游戏新出来，总是先让我玩玩，报告游戏中有什么错误。我觉得他说的没有错，我最近一段时间老是玩游戏，那些FLASH之类的老也不用了。
最近几天，我萌生出了一个不好的想法：将我玩的那个 *** 游戏的服务器给黑了，将我的账号修改成更高级别。可是，我想了又想，这样做是不对的，而且被 *** 警察抓到也是不好的。而且当黑客也需要很高的电脑技术的。
成为IT行业的一员是我的理想，所以我要向这个目标前进，提高自己的电脑技术.
谁能帮我修改一下这篇英语演讲稿？200分 英语 翻译 ！急 !!!!!!!
1.I’m glad that I can get this chance，不仅存在语法错误（没有 I ‘m glad that这样的句型，that从句什么成分来的，主语？？那I 呢？只有it is adj that……），而且比较低档， 改为I’m honored and delightful to get this golden opportunity，我很荣幸，也很高兴获得这样一个天赐良机。
2So I can’t help introducing myself at once虽然语法不错，但按照我们的习惯，很少人在谈到自我介绍时会说“我禁不住要立刻自我介绍……（怪怪的）”，改成So,please allow me to make a brief self-introduction to all of you here today！
3.My English name……naturally……不符合中国人自我介绍的习惯（一般都是先说中文名，再说英文名），,My name is Tang ZiJin ,of course（naturally用得很拗口），you can call me Kearns Jerry，that is my English name
4Everyone has a dream，平铺直叙，比较平淡，食之无味，如同鸡肋啊，这样美化一下，all people around the world cherish their dreams,which may be the same as the others’ ,or totally different from the others’，世界上所有人都有着他们自己的梦想，这个梦想也许和其他人的一样，或者完全不同
5Just use my dream to tell，是很不规范的中式英语，标准的英语是Just take my dream for example！！
6.When I was a little boy,it sound crazy，逻辑混乱，换成When I was a little boy,I was always be wondering it would be very,very crazy if I became a hacker one day in the future
7However，the dream is full ,the reality is slim可能人家听不懂，换个说法吧However，the fuller this(老是用the，听起来不爽) dream is ,the slimer the reality will surely be!
8Because I failed in the way twice不顺口，Because I failed twice in the same way
9So I am the first time I have failed很中式英语，so I failed the first time
10Time is flying换成Time is elapsing不是更妙吗？？？
11结尾部分不错 Thanks everybody换成 thank you so much for your concern！！！
12希望你能兑现200分的承诺 ，言而无信者一般都是……
13为了防止盗版 只能用图片了 白黑的 不好意思？？？？如果我真心要盗版的话，我把图片下载过来，我一个一个字，一个一个字地打，无论三五几分钟，还是十天半个月，我一定能打完的，那结果…………你这种反盗版的措施……呃…… 除非你用马赛克……
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